Maelis Vane, the Crowned Vessel

Level 6 Human Cleric (Domain of the Ash Chorus (custom))

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STR
10
DEX
12 (+1)
CON
15 (+2)
INT
8 (-1)
WIS
16 (+3)
CHA
14 (+2)

Defense

Armor Class 14 (Robes of the Chorus (custom mage armor, ash-hardened) + 2 DEX)
Hit Points 45 (8 + 5d8 + 10 +2)
Speed 30 ft.

Proficiencies & Skills

Saving Throws wisdom, charisma
Skills History +2, Insight +6, Medicine +6, Religion +2, Perception +6, Persuasion +5

Features

Channel Divinity: Litany of Names (custom)

Subclass (custom) Level 2
1/short rest

Maelis recites the names of every person the altar has taken. Each creature of her choice within 60 feet that can hear her must succeed on a DC 14 Wisdom saving throw or be Frightened for 1 minute, hearing its own loved ones' names among the litany. A creature that saves is immune to this use for 24 hours.

Domain of the Ash Chorus

Subclass (custom) Level 1

Custom divine domain granted by the Thirteenth. Maelis gains Command and Spare the Dying as domain cantrips, and Hold Person and Silence always prepared. Her healing magic smells faintly of iron, and any creature she restores to consciousness hears a single whispered name it does not recognize.

The Ledger of the Fed (custom)

Roleplay feature Level 3

Maelis remembers every name of every person she has fed to the altar and recites them like a prayer. She has advantage on Charisma (Persuasion) checks against anyone who has witnessed her do this, and she can identify a person's family and losses with a successful DC 13 Insight check.

Vessel of the Thirteenth (custom)

Patron gift Level 3
1/long rest

The fog knows her. Once per long rest, when Maelis would be reduced to 0 hit points, she drops to 1 hit point instead as the fog pours out of her wounds. She also cannot be located by divination while within fog or smoke.

Channel Divinity: Turn Undead

Class Level 2
1/short rest

As a Magic action, each undead of CR 2 or lower within 30 feet must succeed on a DC 14 Wisdom saving throw or be turned for 1 minute. The Chorus's own dead obey her too readily for this to matter to her.

Blessed Healer (custom domain feature)

Subclass (custom) Level 6

When Maelis casts a spell that heals another creature, she heals 2 + her Wisdom modifier (5) hit points herself. She mends wounds freely โ€” it is how she gathers names.

Acolyte Background: Shelter of the Faithful

Background Level 1

Maelis and her Chorus receive shelter and aid from sea-burial priests in every northern port, and she commands a network of ash-grey assassins and collectors.

Spellcasting (Cleric)

Class Level 1
at will

Maelis is a Wisdom-based divine spellcaster. Save DC 14, spell attack bonus +6. She prepares her spells each dawn from the litany of the Ash Chorus.

Spellcasting

wisdom DC 14 +6 to hit Level 1: 4 slots Level 2: 3 slots Level 3: 3 slots

Prepared spells assume the 2024 rules: 4 cantrips and 7 prepared + 2 domain. She opens encounters with Hold Person or Silence on the party's healer, never entering the front rank.

Sacred Flame

Cantrip Cleric cantrip
evocation 1 action 60 ft. V, S

Flame-like radiance descends on a creature; DEX save DC 14 or take 2d8 radiant damage, with no cover benefit. Increases at higher levels.

Guidance

Cantrip Cleric cantrip
divination 1 action Touch V, S

Target gains 1d4 to one ability check of its choice before the spell ends.

Thaumaturgy

Cantrip Domain cantrip
transmutation 1 action 30 ft. V

Minor divine manifestations: her voice speaks in chorus, candles gutter to ash-grey, fog thickens at a doorway.

Spare the Dying

Cantrip Domain cantrip
necromancy 1 action Touch V, S

Stabilizes a dying creature at 0 hit points. Maelis uses it constantly โ€” she keeps people alive to be named later.

Bless

Level 1 Cleric
enchantment 1 action 30 ft. V, S, M

Up to 3 creatures add 1d4 to attack rolls and saving throws for 1 minute.

Command

Level 1 Domain spell
enchantment 1 action 60 ft. V

One word of command; target WIS save DC 14 or obeys (approach, kneel, flee, etc.).

Cure Wounds

Level 1 Cleric
evocation 1 action Touch V, S

Heals 1d8 + 3 hit points. She will share her food and mend your wounds before explaining why your crew must die.

Hold Person

Level 2 Domain spell
enchantment 1 action 60 ft. V, S, M

Humanoid target WIS save DC 14 or Paralyzed for up to 1 minute, repeating the save each turn. Her opener against the party's healer.

Silence

Level 2 Domain spell
illusion 1 action 120 ft. V, S

20-ft-radius sphere of silence for 10 minutes; no sound, no verbal spell components. Used to cut the healer off from the fight.

Blindness/Deafness

Level 2 Cleric
necromancy 1 action 120 ft. V, S

Target CON save DC 14 or Blinded for 1 minute, repeating the save each turn.

Spiritual Weapon

Level 2 Cleric
evocation 1 bonus action 60 ft. V, S

A floating spectral blade of grey ash attacks at +6, dealing 1d8 + 3 force damage.

Dispel Magic

Level 3 Cleric
abjuration 1 action 120 ft. V, S

Ends one spell effect on a creature or object, automatically ending spells of 3rd level or lower.

Spirit Guardians

Level 3 Cleric
conjuration 1 action Self (15-ft radius) V, S, M

Grey, ash-faced figures of the fed dead circle her; creatures in the radius WIS save DC 14 or take 3d8 radiant damage and are slowed, half on a success. The faces are the names she recites.

Behind the character

Character Information

Maelis Vane is a tall, tired woman in layered grey sea-burial robes, and the first thing anyone notices about her is that she is kind. She shares her food. She mends wounds without being asked. She remembers the names of dead sailors' mothers and asks after them. She is warm-faced, salt-grey, and completely unshakeable, and every one of those qualities is genuine โ€” which is what makes her the most dangerous person in the campaign.

She is not a fanatic performing conviction; she is a woman who was saved, and who has organized her entire soul around the arithmetic of that salvation. The fog took her crew one by one and then took her, and the Thirteenth gave her back, and she has decided โ€” with the calm of someone who has done the sums โ€” that any price paid now is a rounding error against eternity.

She will feed the party's crew to an altar and then sit with them while they grieve, and she will mean both. She carries a mended logbook she rereads nightly and a ladle of black stone, as if serving soup to ghosts, and she recites the names of everyone she has fed like a prayer because to her it is one: a roll call of the saved, not the damned.

Her holy symbol is a circle of thirteen dots in tarnished silver; her crown of grey coral and old gold does not sit on her head so much as grow from it. Around her the Ash Chorus kneels in grey and speaks in unison, and she heals them freely and remembers their dead by name, which is why they would walk into the fog for her. She fights like a healer: from the back rank, with control magic, opening with Hold Person or Silence on whoever looks like the party's heart, and if she is hurt she does not fight harder โ€” she withdraws into the fog, which knows her, and rejoins the battle later.

She prefers to let the altar do her killing. If the party talks, she listens โ€” genuinely, patiently, the way a good surgeon listens โ€” and then offers them a place in the Chorus, and the horror is that the offer is sincere.

Before the adventure

Character Background

Maelis Vane was born in a chandler's family in a northern port, the elder of two daughters, and went to sea as a ship's surgeon because she was good at mending things and bad at staying ashore. She signed with Carl of the Seven Seas' first Borealis expedition as a competent, unremarkable healer with a sister too young for articles who stowed away to be with her. At the fog wall, the fog demanded one life.

The logbook records the demand and Maelis's decision in the same hand, in the same ink, without hesitation: she gave her sister's name. Elspeth Vane was left at the gate. The Penitent Star went through. On the island, the crew found the terraces and the altar, and the altar found them. The fog took the crew one by one โ€” Maelis has never been able to establish whether the Chorus had an agent aboard arranging it or whether the island simply did what the island does โ€” and then it took her.

She remembers dying. She remembers the fog pouring out of her wounds, and she remembers the Thirteenth speaking to her in a chorus of every voice it had ever been fed, and she remembers being given back. What she does not remember is her mother's face; the fog took that too, and she has never told anyone, because the god who saved her saved her incomplete and she cannot decide whether that was a price or a mercy.

She returned south alone through the fog, which called her Crowned Vessel and let her pass without a price, and she did not ask why. She found the Ash Chorus โ€” a two-hundred-year-old network of sea-burial priests who had been buying charts and counting sailors in every northern port without ever quite knowing what they were counting for โ€” and she gave it a purpose: a date, an altar, and a crew.

She has spent a year on Borealis preparing the Ninth Terrace, feeding the strand altar with travelers she waylays on the forest paths, and waiting for Carl's expedition, because the altar is dry and the blood price must be paid in full and the old bloodlines are gone. She sabotaged the Sea-Devil's Due in Lordinium through an agent named Sedge and a guilty navigator named Jory Tallow, with cuts designed to open the hull in heavy weather rather than sink her at dock โ€” because she wants the crew alive until the fog.

She keeps a private ledger of every name she has fed, written in her own hand, and recites them like a prayer; she does not know that the Chorus's official records list different names, that the inner circle has been embezzling the blood price in her name, or that the fog opened for her free on her return because she is not the god's vessel but the fog's new warden โ€” a prisoner promoted.

She has refused the Thirteenth's offer to return Elspeth's last breath three times, on the grounds that accepting would make the price a transaction rather than a devotion, and she has never told anyone about the offers. She believes, with the certainty of the saved, that the god will end death itself. She is wrong. The Thirteenth cannot end death; it can only feed on it, and it has been lying to her for a year.

The one thing that can shake her is her sister, who is alive on the wreck of the Penitent Star, eating shellfish and waiting, and who has spent the same year constructing an entirely different story about what happened at the fog wall. When those two stories meet, the arithmetic that holds Maelis's soul together stops balancing, and what happens next depends entirely on who is standing beside her when it does.

Threads to follow

Unresolved Plots

  • The first leader of the Ash Chorus, whose name is the oldest entry in Maelis's ledger, was never replaced โ€” the Chorus's cells still send a portion of every collection to a grave in Harrowgate shrine that has no body under it, and someone has been leaving fresh coral beads on the stone every month for two hundred years.
  • Maelis's cousin Hessa Vane keeps a chandler's shop in a northern port and has been sending the Chorus supplies for a year under the impression her cousin is running a charitable burial order. Hessa does not know what the Chorus does, and Maelis has been paying her in coin nobody has minted in a hundred years to keep her from asking.
  • The Penitent Star's logbook has a page torn out that Maelis keeps in a locket around her neck beneath her holy symbol. She has never shown it to anyone. The torn corner matches the page torn from Carl's chart in Act I, and the two pieces together contain the complete key-words for the fog wall โ€” including the words Maelis used to pass free on her return.
  • One of the seven bodies Elspeth buries in Act II is a Chorus priest who was aboard the first expedition in disguise, which means the Chorus had an agent on Carl's crew before Maelis ever joined it โ€” and that agent's reports, if they exist, would show who in the Chorus ordered the first expedition's sacrifice and whether Maelis was chosen or assigned.
  • The Thirteenth has offered Maelis the same bargain three times: end the binding, and it will return Elspeth's last breath to her. Maelis has refused it three times because she believes accepting would make the price a transaction rather than a devotion โ€” but she has never told anyone about the offers, and the Thirteenth has never told her that it makes the same offer to every Chorus leader it has ever had.

Beneath the surface

Secrets

  • Maelis chose her sister's name at the fog wall deliberately. The logbook records the fog's demand and her decision in the same hand, in the same ink, without hesitation โ€” and the hesitation is what she has never forgiven herself for, not the choice.
  • Maelis cannot remember her mother's face. The fog took it along with Elspeth, and she has never told anyone, because the god who gave her back gave her back incomplete and she cannot decide whether that was a price or a mercy.
  • Maelis has been feeding the strand altar on the island without the inner circle's knowledge, using travelers she waylays on the forest paths, because the inner circle's false ledger names have made her doubt whether the altar is receiving what she gives it โ€” and she has begun to wonder whether the altar is drinking the offerings at all, or whether something else is.

What haunts them

Fears

  • That Elspeth survived the fog wall and knows Maelis chose her โ€” and that Elspeth's forgiveness, if it comes, would be worse than her hatred.
  • That the Thirteenth cannot end death at all, and that every name in her ledger was collected for nothing โ€” a fear she suppresses by reciting the litany louder.
  • That she is not the Chorus's leader but its prisoner, kept alive by a god who needs a vessel and would replace her the moment she stopped being useful.

What drives them

Aspirations

  • To stand at a completed altar and watch the last chain break, and to hear the Thirteenth say her name the way the fog did โ€” Crowned Vessel โ€” as a welcome rather than a claim.
  • To perform one sea-burial rite, properly, for her sister, with the words of the Twelve and a weight on the shroud, which the Chorus forbids because the fog's taken are its property.
  • To be forgiven by someone who knows everything โ€” not absolved, which she could argue her way into, but forgiven, which she cannot.

Personal quest ยท 1

The Sister Left at the Gate

Maelis believes Elspeth Vane died at the fog wall when Maelis paid the price with her sister's name. The Penitent Star's logbook, which Maelis keeps mended and rereads nightly, ends with the entry she cannot bear to finish. If the party brings proof that Elspeth survived the wreck and lives, Maelis must choose between the god who saved her and the sister she fed to the fog. She will send assassins to silence the bearers of the news before it reaches her own ears, because she already suspects. Completing this quest forces Maelis's crisis of faith and unlocks her redemption path.

Current Stage

Discover that Elspeth Vane is alive aboard the Penitent Star wreck.

Choice
Deliver the proof to Maelis directly at the Heart
Maelis receives the logbook page and the truth in front of the Thirteenth.
Alternative
Give Elspeth the Chorus ledger and let her confront her sister
Elspeth walks into the Heart under a white sailcloth flag, carrying the names Maelis recites.
Mechanical Rewards
  • Maelis as a redeemed ally or a permanently broken Thirteenth
  • The Crown of the Vessel, unattuned and inert, worth 1,000 gp as a relic
Narrative Rewards
  • Elspeth and Maelis reunited, or Maelis buried at sea with her sister reciting her name

Personal quest ยท 2

The Ledger of the Fed

Maelis's logbook is not the Penitent Star's log โ€” it is her own, a private ledger of every name she has fed to the altar since her return, written in her own hand, in order, with dates. She believes the ledger is a prayer. The party can steal it, and if they do, they discover something Maelis has never noticed: the names in her ledger do not match the names in the Chorus's own offering records.

Someone in the Chorus has been feeding the altar in her name and recording different names โ€” names of people who are still alive. Completing this quest reveals the Chorus's inner circle has been embezzling the blood price, and gives Maelis a reason to doubt her own god that has nothing to do with her sister.

Current Stage

Steal or copy Maelis's private ledger from the Chorus shrine on the Strand of Bones.

Choice
Steal the ledger outright
Maelis notices within a day and the Chorus hunts the party across the island.
Alternative
Copy it and leave the original
The party has the evidence and Maelis does not yet know.
Mechanical Rewards
  • A weakened or strengthened Maelis depending on the party's approach
  • The Chorus's offering records as evidence against the Twelve
Narrative Rewards
  • The truth of who has actually been paying the blood price for the last year

Personal quest ยท 3

The Words That Opened the Wall

Maelis knows the key-words that open the fog wall โ€” she used them to bring the Penitent Star through, and she used them again on her return, alone, when the fog called her Crowned Vessel and let her pass without a price. She has never told anyone the words, not even the inner circle, and she has never asked why the fog let her through free the second time. If the party captures a Chorus courier's satchel or interrogates Sedge the caulker, they learn the Chorus has been trying to reconstruct the words for a year and failing.

Maelis has been letting them fail. This quest asks why: the fog does not open for the words anymore. It opens for Maelis. She is not the Chorus's vessel. She is the fog's.

Current Stage

Learn that the Chorus cannot open the fog wall without Maelis.

Choice
Interrogate Sedge the caulker in Lordinium
Sedge reveals the Chorus's couriers have made four attempts to pass the wall without Maelis and four crews have not come home.
Alternative
Capture a Chorus courier's satchel at sea
The sealed letter inside is addressed to Maelis and contains a failed attempt at the words, crossed out and rewritten eleven times.
Mechanical Rewards
  • The complete key-words that open the fog wall without any price
  • Cassian freed from the arch if the fog's nature is understood
Narrative Rewards
  • The truth of the fog: it is not the god's servant but the god's prison, and Maelis is its new keeper

Major Decision

Context

At the Heart of Borealis, before any fighting begins, Maelis offers the party a place in the Chorus: their crew delivered to the altar, their own lives and freedom guaranteed, and a share of the eternity the Thirteenth promises. She is sincere. She will even let them walk away and take their ship home if they leave the crew behind.

Choice Made
Accept Maelis's offer, refuse it, or counter-offer: the party's healer joins the Chorus in exchange for the crew's freedom.
Impact

Accepting makes the party's healer a Chorus initiate with access to the Domain of the Ash Chorus spells (Command and Spare the Dying as cantrips, Hold Person and Silence always prepared) at the cost of the crew's lives and the party's standing with Halda Storm, who will never forgive it. Refusing begins the fight as written. Counter-offering splits Maelis's attention: she must weigh a genuine healer against a crew of forty, and if the party's healer accepts, Maelis releases the crew but the healer is now an NPC under the DM's control with a redemption arc of their own.

Major Decision

Context

If the party has broken the altar at the Ninth Terrace and Maelis has withdrawn into the fog below half her hit points, she can be followed. The fog wall at the crater's edge is passable to anyone wearing the Warden's coral mask. Inside is not the Heart but the fog's own country: a grey country where the taken crew of the Penitent Star, including Ottilie, still walk.

Choice Made
Follow Maelis into the fog and fight her on her ground, or hold the crater and let her come to them.
Impact

Following into the fog means fighting Maelis where she cannot be located by divination and where her Vessel of the Thirteenth feature recharges every round instead of once per long rest โ€” but it also means the party can reach Elspeth's drowned crewmates and Ottilie, who can be freed if Maelis is defeated inside the fog. Holding the crater means a conventional fight with the terrain advantages described in the encounter, but Maelis rejoins the fight at full strength if she escapes, and the fog's prisoners remain trapped.

Major Decision

Context

If the party proves the Thirteenth has been lying โ€” through Elspeth, through the ledger discrepancy, or through Nesa's testimony โ€” Maelis will break. In that moment, before the Thirteenth can bargain with the rest of the party, Maelis will ask the party one question: whether she should break the altar herself and die doing it, or live and face what she has done.

Choice Made
Tell Maelis to break the altar and die, or tell her to live with it.
Impact

If she breaks the altar, the Thirteenth's regeneration is permanently destroyed and the finale becomes a fight against a weakened avatar โ€” but Maelis dies, and the Chorus's surviving priests scatter into the northern ports as ordinary sea-burial clergy. If she lives, the party gains a level 1 commoner ally with intimate knowledge of the Chorus's cells, the altar's drain mechanism, and the Thirteenth's bargaining patterns (advantage on all Insight checks against the Thirteenth's offers), but the Thirteenth's regeneration remains intact unless the party finds another way to scatter the bound blood.

Transformative Moment

Trigger

The party presents Elspeth Vane's survival to Maelis

Transformation

Maelis's certainty cracks for the first time in a year. She stops reciting the litany mid-name. Mechanically, she loses advantage on Persuasion against witnesses of her feeding and her Litany of Names becomes Broken Litany.

Mechanical Changes

Transformative Moment

Trigger

Maelis learns the fog opened for her free on her return

Transformation

She realizes she is not the god's vessel but the fog's warden, and that every name in her ledger was collected by a prison, not a church.

Mechanical Changes

Transformative Moment

Trigger

Maelis breaks the altar herself

Transformation

She recites every name backward and dies as the black stone goes grey. The Thirteenth loses its regeneration permanently.

Mechanical Changes

Ally

Elspeth Vane

Relationship Sister and unwitting salvation
Influence 3/10
Loyalty 5/10

Shared History

Maelis and Elspeth grew up in a chandler's family in a northern port, two sisters four years apart who crewed the same fishing boats before either could sign a manifest. When Carl's first expedition hired, Maelis signed as ship's surgeon and Elspeth, too young for articles, came aboard as cabin hand against their mother's explicit instruction โ€” the last thing Maelis ever heard her say. At the fog wall, when the fog demanded its price, Maelis gave her sister's name.

She has spent a year believing Elspeth is dead, and the belief is the foundation the Thirteenth built her salvation on: the god took her sister, and the god gave Maelis back, and the arithmetic of that trade is the only thing that makes the altar bearable. Elspeth, meanwhile, has spent the same year alone on the wreck's stern, eating shellfish and waiting, and has constructed an entirely different story in which her sister was taken by the fog too and the woman who chose her name had no choice. Both stories are wrong. When the party brings them together, neither woman's account of the fog wall survives contact with the other's.

Enemy

Captain Orrin Grieve

Threat Level 4/10
Conflict Type Rival claimant to the god's power

Personal Stakes

Grieve and Maelis have circled each other since the smoking strait, where his Widow's Due shadowed her supply run two years ago and she let his boarding party take a Chorus ship full of reliquaries rather than fight, because she needed him to believe the Chorus was weak. He believes she is a fanatic with a god on a leash; she believes he is a man who wants to wear a god like a coat and will feed the altar everything he can catch to do it.

He keeps one of her priests chained in his hold and asks it for advice, which she considers a blasphemy worse than anything the Twelve ever did. She has ordered his death four times; her assassins have reached his deck twice, and both times he bought them. What she does not know is that Grieve's letter of marque is from a kingdom that no longer exists because the fog took its fleet, and that he blames her god for the same loss she blames the Twelve for. They are the same wound, pointed in opposite directions, and at the Heart of Borealis they will each offer the party the other's head as a down payment.

Faction

The Ash Chorus

Standing 10/10

Influence

Maelis is not the Chorus's founder; she is its second leader, and the first leader's name is the oldest entry in her ledger. She inherited a network of sea-burial priests that had been buying charts and counting sailors in northern ports for two hundred years, and she gave it a purpose it had never had: a date, an altar, and a crew to fill it. The Chorus obeys her without question because she is the only person alive who has passed the fog wall twice and returned, and because she heals them freely, and because she remembers their dead by name โ€” which, for a cult of sea-burial priests, is the highest currency there is.

But her authority is built entirely on the Thirteenth's promises, and the inner circle knows things she does not: the Ash-Handed Chorister has been recording different names in the official ledgers than the ones in her private book, and at least three priests believe the altar should be fed now, with what the Chorus has, rather than waiting for Carl's expedition. If Maelis falls or turns, the Chorus does not simply fracture โ€” it splits three ways: the loyalists who follow her sister's name, the pragmatists who want to feed the altar with the crew they already have, and the ones who were only ever in it for the burial rites and will go back to being ordinary clergy the moment someone gives them permission. Maelis's greatest fear is not that the party will kill her. It is that they will turn her, and she will have to look at what she built.

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